Band 6.0–6.5

Band 7.0–7.5

The flow-chart gives information about how the whole beans are processed into the final products for the customers. There are altogether three steps from picking beans to manufacturing the final products for individual consumption or industrial utilization.

Initially, the whole beans are picked from trees and their shells are removed, after which those beans are dried. At the next stage, producers press the processed products in two ways: further pressing and further refining respectively.

For the former method, after the additional pressing, cocoa cake would be ground (bị nghiền nhỏ). After being ground, the outcome as cocoa powder is for individual consumers and the cocoa liquor is for the industrial production of cakes or drinks.

For the latter, industrial chocolate with the combination of sugar is finally producing the completed chocolate products.

Overall, the beans could be taken full advantages of by producers to make various products in 3 stages.  

The flow chart illustrates how whole beans are processed into a range of final products for consumers. Overall, the process consists of three main stages, beginning with harvesting the beans and ending with the production of various consumer and industrial goods.

Initially, whole beans are harvested from trees, after which their outer shells are removed. The beans are then dried to prepare them for further processing. In the next stage, the dried beans are pressed and processed in two different ways: further pressing and further refining.

Under the first method, the beans undergo additional pressing, producing cocoa cake, which is subsequently ground. This grinding process results in two products: cocoa powder, which is intended for individual consumers, and cocoa liquor, which is mainly used in the industrial production of cakes and beverages.

Under the second method, the refined product is combined with sugar to produce industrial chocolate, which is then processed into finished chocolate products.

❌Lỗi

Dùng từ sai hoặc không tự nhiên:
taken full advantages of → take full advantage of
finally producing → are finally produced
the completed chocolate products → finished chocolate products

✔ Những điểm đạt

Có overview rõ ràng, nêu:
số giai đoạn (three main stages)
điểm kết thúc (consumer & industrial products)

Liên kết tốt với:
Initially, In the next stage, Under the first method, Under the second method

Từ vựng học thuật, đúng ngữ cảnh:
processed, refined, undergo, subsequently, fully utilized
industrial production, final products

Dùng topic vocabulary chính xác:
cocoa cake / powder / liquor

Câu phức tự nhiên, chính xác:
after which…, which is subsequently…, resulting in…